There was a little girl called June who had a dark and creepy cave of doom.Every night she would run around with a torch.On this very night she sneaked into the cave but didn't bring a torch.Suddenly she was shocked to see a dead body on the floor.She was desperate to investigate but she would miss lunch.June suddenly wanted to go running out the cave screaming although that would get her into a lot of trouble.June make a quick decision and it was to peep at the repulsive body and go...
Vincent 4K
Impressive Vincent, well done. I really like how you leave it at the end, what did June think when she saw the body? Remember next time to leave a space after each full stop.
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