Saturday 30 January 2016

Week 4- The Fight

I was walking home from school but I fell over and it stung like a bee but later that day I felt fine. My brother and I talked about how we would spend the afternoon. My mum and dad went on a walk and my brother and I fell out. We had a great big argument and afterwards my brother beat me up; it hurt. We got really told off and mum didn't trust us so we both got banned from our computers for the rest of the day. And then, I had a very spooky nightmare about bloodred vampires...

Edward 6F
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  1. Unknown31 January 2016 at 09:05

    Thanks for your entry, Edward. Perhaps at the end you could come back to the bee sting somehow. Maybe it could give you super powers!

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  2. Unknown1 February 2016 at 12:01

    Great effort Edward.

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