Friday, 5 February 2016

Week 5- The Forensic Flames

The ferocious fire ripped through the flaming building. Winged forces floated around like butterflies trying to prevent the flabbergasting fire spreading. Distressed children lay coward at the top of the building wailing for help. Luckily the winged firemen were doing exceptionally well to control the fire with hoses and buckets, full to the brim with crystal clear, blue water. Now, the flame proof firemen were rescuing the poor children from this scary scene. Townsfolk looked in awe as the flickering flames tore the building apart like piece of paper. The fearless firemen thought they had rescued everyone. But had they?

Hugo, 5GM


  1. Hi Hugo,
    Thanks for taking the time to do this week's 100 word challenge. I enjoyed reading your story. I'm hoping the fearless firemen had rescued everyone! You've put a doubt in my mind.
    Keep up the good work,
    Mrs Boyce,

  2. Thank you, this article really help me to understand more than before.