Maisie, 5W
Wednesday 27 January 2016
Week 4- Dentist Drama
As I woke up with a start, I realised that later that day I would have to go to the dentist. I hated the dentist because I was only 6, though my sister liked it, and she was 14. So that is why I don’t like the dentist. Okay, I don’t like going to the dentist because they use weird thimajigs that Dr James puts in my mouth. I knew that mum would be annoyed if I threw a tantrum like I did 7 months ago when I went the dentist last. As I jumped in the car my mum said it will be fine, and I will do a great job. Or will I ….
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Super effort Maisie. Count how many times you have written dentist. Now try and change it so you only write it once, do you think it reads better?
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