Tuesday 10 January 2017

Week 16 - The Haunted House

As we stood numbly nervous outside the creepy, towering, mansion-like house, we stared guiltily at the shattered window which our ball had smashed. “Shall you go in first or shall I?” Tom quizzed me. ‘’Let’s go in together,’’ I announced fearfully. Meticulously, he clambered through the jagged gap, making sure that the broken shards didn’t stab him. I followed him cautiously but disastrously, was brutally wounded. Once we were inside, I saw that everything was heavily draped in thick cobwebs and the smell of decay hung in the air. Where was Tom? I looked in front and behind. Which way?
Marianne 5H

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