Friday, 22 April 2016

Week 14- The magical box

I once heard a myth about a magical box that was incredibly rare so I went exploring to find it...across deserts,jungles and villages.In the jungle the monkeys knew what I was seaching for and they showed me the way!I found,it was carved in a special way with carvings on the solid oak.I put my hand in the box and felt a marvellous sensation throughout my body,from that day on I was as lucky as everyday could be.

Maya, 5L

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  1. Great blog Maya! I liked how you ellipsis and how you said: '...a marvellous sensation throughout my body...' Keep it up! I would absolutely love it if you would visit my class's blog:http://j5sladeprimary.edublogs.org/

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