As I look through my window, I see the flames from a burning house. Out they come, I couldn't believe my eyes, is it really the winged fighters?
Bringing hope to the people trapped inside, fearlessly they fly towards the flames that reach for the sky. In the shadows of the billowing smoke, the crowd gasp in awe at the courage of these brave men. A frightened red-cheeked girl and her baby sister, lean over the balcony into the arms of safety.
Two more fighters arrive to finally put out the flames, everyone is safe, thanks to these heroes.
Josh 4C
Josh you have a wonderful way with words! I love the great adjectives and adverbs you used, making your story so enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work!
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