Saturday, 6 February 2016

Week 5- My Dream

Screams filled the street and smoke was covering the sun above me. The building next door was on fire. Standing in the balcony was a beautiful woman with dark brown hair was holding a newborn baby that was wailing wildly. Out of nowhere, men with dragon wings came with a hose and started to extinguish the fire. Another came and took the woman and baby down to safety.

Luckily it was just a dream. But when I opened my eyes, I saw a fireman through the window. Maybe it wasn’t a dream...

Tvishaa 5H

1 comment:

  1. Mrs Maddison, Team 100WC, Ireland8 February 2016 at 01:41

    Well done, what a dramatic opening sentence to catch the reader's attention! You used a lot of detail from the picture prompt and thought carefully about the images you saw. The description of the baby "wailing wildly" is very effective and good use of alliteration. Great effort, keep up the good work!