Saturday 30 January 2016

Week 4- THE PANDA ADVENTURE

ONE SUNNY DAY ELLA WAS CLIMBING IN THE QINILING MOUNTIANS IN CHINA. LATER THAT DAY, SHE STUMBLED INTO A PATCH OF LEAVES.JUST THEN SHE SAW A PLUMP CHEEKED BABY PANDA.SUDDENLY SHE HEARD A NOISE.A VERY PECULIAR NOISE. WITHOUT WARNING SHE HID BEHIND A TREE.THEN SHE SAW SOME WOLVES WITH YELLOW MYSTERIOUS EYES.THE WOLVES GROWLED AT THE BABY PANDA THEY WERE JUST ABOUT TO ATTACK HER.THE BABY PANDA LOOKED TERRIFIED AND ELLA KNEW SHE HAD TO DO SOMETHING VERY QUICKLY.AT THAT VERY MOMENT SHE BRAVELY JUMPED IN AND RESCUED THE BABY PANDA.

“PHEW THAT WAS JUST IN TIME.”

Mia 3D

1 comment:

  1. Love your language choices Mia. Try not to write the whole story in capitals as I read it in a shouting voice. This is a technique you can use to make your readers shout sentences/words.
    Great effort.

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