As I joined the queue I realised that one of my burger buns had no seeds on top. So when I reached the front of the line I made a complaint about it and the cashier said, "why do you have to be so fussy?"So when I got home that night, my heart sunk like a rock in a swimming pool.I was cooking my burgers when suddenly out of the BALD BURGER BUN came a mutant burger which spat SEEDS! it very very very very almost ambushed the whole city. I was very very determined to fix it but how?
Josh, 3B
Well done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writing. You have used a good range of punctuation and I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger. How are you going to fix it?
ReplyDeleteWell done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writing. You have used a good range of punctuation and I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger. How are you going to fix it?
ReplyDeleteDear Josh
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is very imaginative. About having a bald burger bun.