tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post912124062660023446..comments2023-03-24T08:02:39.298-07:00Comments on Cleves School - 100 Word Challenge: Week 2- The Bald Burger BunUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post-44622859124405723552016-01-17T09:42:32.168-08:002016-01-17T09:42:32.168-08:00Dear Josh
I think your idea is very imaginative. A...Dear Josh<br />I think your idea is very imaginative. About having a bald burger bun.Ella from 3Cnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post-34013509112915631252016-01-14T11:43:41.255-08:002016-01-14T11:43:41.255-08:00Well done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writin...Well done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writing. You have used a good range of punctuation and I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger. How are you going to fix it?Mr Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12356150131139504909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post-16833775857947046462016-01-14T11:42:58.710-08:002016-01-14T11:42:58.710-08:00Well done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writin...Well done Josh, an amusing and fun piece of writing. You have used a good range of punctuation and I like how you have left it on a cliffhanger. How are you going to fix it?Mr Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12356150131139504909noreply@blogger.com