tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post4373518624823458055..comments2023-03-24T08:02:39.298-07:00Comments on Cleves School - 100 Word Challenge: Week 2 - As I Joined the QueueUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post-39528037185128148682016-01-18T04:47:46.276-08:002016-01-18T04:47:46.276-08:00Minsung this is an excellent piece of work! You...Minsung this is an excellent piece of work! You've used a variety of punctuation to help create suspense and I love your use of rhetorical questions to help us readers get an idea of what the character is thinking. Keep up the excellent work.<br /><br />Miss Hart, UKAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09642073293994869943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088808030642739882.post-23372700262644760502016-01-18T00:26:29.792-08:002016-01-18T00:26:29.792-08:00Nightmare! Has that ever happened to anyone you kn...Nightmare! Has that ever happened to anyone you know?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11817845883065535211noreply@blogger.com