Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Week 13- 100 Word Story

In the land of Witchotopia lived the most ugliest witch you have seen. She had a horrendous, green looking spot on her left cheek. Her sisters used to cackle and cackle whenever they saw her. The Witch had enough of them making fun of her so she made a cream designed to get rid of her spot. But when she first applied the cream to her cheek she thought it had worked but the spot just grew and grew until it covered the whole of her cheek and her nose. Upset, the Witch started shouting to her sisters HELP ME.

Antoni, 6S

1 comment:

  1. What an entertaining story Antoni. By starting with a place name, you immediately encourage your readers to begin to conjure up a place in their minds. Perhaps you could do the same for your witch? What should she be called? And her sisters? They don't sound like a pair who might come and help when the witch started crying out. Oh dear!
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.