Friday, 15 January 2016

Week 2- The Robot

I heard a rumble in the ground. Then a second, louder. What was it? I was waiting last in the queue for STAR WARS The Force Awakens. You could hear it, like a mechanical whirring noise, a robot of some sort. BOOM! I could sense it was near, and then repeated gunfire. Next world war or what? I
needed to get inside...Every door was slammed shut and locked. It was coming down the High Street. I hid in the nearest bush the robot sent a signal of some sort and more robots came… the bush was pulled up…

Rishikesh, 5T

1 comment:

  1. Well done Rishikesh, I like how you have used short sentences to build up suspense and interest. Great use of punctuation too to engage the reader!

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