As I joined the queue excitedly, my heart was quickly broken. It was a catastrophe! I couldn’t believe it. I was at the back of the queue to see my favourite movie…live! There were a 100 people in front of me. Am I ever going to get to the front of the queue? I don’t know how many seats there are. I can just taste the popcorn melting in my mouth! As the queue went down, I felt very excited but I still wasn’t at the front. But I made it, there was just one seat left just for me.
Amy, 3B
Well done Amy, I enjoyed reading your piece of writing and liked how you built suspense through the use of different punctuation and short sentences.
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