Friday, 15 January 2016

Week 2- The Demon Dinner Lady

As I joined the queue I smelt a foul aroma. I looked at my friend chucking up what he just eaten. The dinner lady smiled, her horrid yellow teeth wonky and all. I glanced at her hair but I looked too far. Underneath her hair were squirming serpents, she was wearing a blonde wig. Was she an alien, was she a goddess? We got to the front, my friend and I were horrified. Was the food poisonous? It all made sense, this was why the food was gruesome. We had to defeat her. But how should we destroy the monster?

Matthew, 4C

1 comment:

  1. Oooh how unpleasant Matthew, it's a good job we don't have a dinner lady like that at Cleves! I really like how you describe the dinner lady and how you use questions to engage the reader. Well done!

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